Saturday, March 19, 2011

First

如果
太阳的照射,是你的快乐,
云朵的雨滴,是你偷哭泣,
晴天的平静,是你在冷静,
希望
平静的晴天,过得快,
想哭的云朵,少出来,
幸福的阳光,永远在。

The first poem-like sentence I wrote,
Edited again although.
But the first I posted was,

牵手或放手,幸福或祝福。

The original 1 about is
如果,
太阳的照射,是你的快乐,
云朵的雨滴,是你在哭泣,
晴天的平静,是你在冷静,
那么我希望
平静的晴天过得快,
想哭的云朵少出来,
太阳的照射永远都在。

4 comments:

Kai said...

I like d last sentence leh..
=D

♠YzW said...

i like it too hahax
:D

♥ janice chau said...

not bad!! xDD

♠YzW said...

hahax
older posts better
latest posts simply write de
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